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Views: 18Date: Mar 18 2007, 5:47 pmMood: Dont know

so let me take this time and tell you my name
ive been through hella shit and most certainly pain
You can find me stuck in the ditch that im usually in
It's so hard to describe the feelings comin deep from within
I try to fight off everything and try to switch lanes
But Everytime i try i crash, it just all stays the same

It's so hard to trust and so hard but i must
Must trytah keep goin and keep believin n such
But i can't stop,
the drama is fueling my thoughts
I'll put in all the words, that i've ever been taught
My Heart n Soul blaze when im writing these lines
So I take each verse n words, each one at a time

And i know, that i am sick of all the drama n shit
but everytime i say i'll stay out of it, im just being a fuckin hyporcryte
This is it, I cant feel nothin no more,
i'really wanna finish off what have started before,
and ill endure all the ridicule that you have to say
You just better not interfere n just stay outta my way

My goal is to just stop, n drop from this race
Become a hermit, drink my tea, and embrace the great taste
As you have listened in so far i hope i made myself clear
This a shity way for me to start off this year



Posted by: Sen091990  Date: Mar 19 2007, 8:47 pm
That's awesome. I have respect for people who can express themselves because it's so hard for me to express myself.
Posted by: melissarenee  Date: Mar 19 2007, 7:52 pm
Very good poem.

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